Pitch Feedback

I did feel like my pitch went really well- there were a couple of points I had to clear up at the end, but overall I got the impression my lecturers liked it. I was given a 65, which I am massively disappointed in (the perfectionist in me springs out every feedback day). There isn’t enough time to include the IS angle in my piece, so I need to find another topic to make it relevant, that isn’t as complex to explain. I’m frustrated because I didn’t really realise how short 7 minutes of time really is. Back to the drawing board I guess.